Thursday, November 5, 2009
A breeze caressed me
as I watched the fireflies
dance beneath the moon's glow,
shadows fluttering softly
about them and bouncing off
the silver ribbons sent from heaven.
Warm memories flooded my heart,
leading to beautiful dreams
that spun a path to you.
And though the night
surrounded me,
I could see your smile
and hear your voice...
and, like always,
I yearned for your touch,
yearned for you!
as I watched the fireflies
dance beneath the moon's glow,
shadows fluttering softly
about them and bouncing off
the silver ribbons sent from heaven.
Warm memories flooded my heart,
leading to beautiful dreams
that spun a path to you.
And though the night
surrounded me,
I could see your smile
and hear your voice...
and, like always,
I yearned for your touch,
yearned for you!






37 Zingers:
What a lovely post, poem and picture...love them all!!!
Smooches,
Sassy Chica
WOW!!!
That was beautiful...
im speechless
:)
satin & romance.
wow...beautiful...cod feel tat:)...lovely:)
and you truly make me wanna go grab him right now!
Nice! Really nice!
it was so beautiful ria...i just loved the way u described the feeling of the girl in those words...:)..
urs..hemu..
ummmmmm sensual :)
...I yearned for your touch,
yearned for you!
beautiful!
ahan!!! romantic shomantic :P
it is blessing to be in love
wonderful....u have the art of beautifying ur words...lovely
waahhh..looks like ur missing K..?? Is that so?? awwww... :)
Loadsa love,
Nikhil
Beautiful!!
love that
ummmm...yummmmm!!!!
heyy wooww.w... beautiful and romanticcc..:)
Good one ria...:)
kya sahi hai!!! u def believe in romance.. good for u!
Wow! Really beautiful, Ria! Loved it... :)
Hobo: :) Yes!!
Tulip: Thanks sweets! :)
Hemu: Thanks for liking the poem buddy. :)
Btw that girl is me. :P
AD: I know gurls like me wud wanna do that too! :)
Sunshine: :) Thanks!! Thats the intent of the poem.
Chica: Thanks hun!!i m glad u liked both. :)
Harini: Thanks for saying that sweets!! :)
Mulling: Thanks for saying that. :)
DD: Its a blessing when two ppl are together in love. :) In my case...he's not here :(
Miss: Thanks hun!!those r the best phrases in the poem.
Anwesa: Thanks sweets! :)
Swati: Thanks hun!! :)
Angels: Thanks for saying that, glad to know tht u liked the poem. :)
MM: Yeah thats precisely why i wrote this....missing him a lot! :(
Errant: :) Thanks!!
Mayz: Lol!! What an expression... :D
Pramoda: Thanks for saying that buddy. :)
Dhanya: Thanks for saying that dear. I m glad u liked it.
How: He he!!yes i m a true romantic...and hey welcome to my blog. :)
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